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Hiya there, glad to meetcha! Thanks for dropping by ...! For those of you looking for Jesus' Love Online Bible Network, it has been shut down due to my caring for my mother, who had cancer ... We're hoping to reopen soon! A little about me? My desire is watching children's books come to life, especially for those who will "listen" and open their little hearts to God's Word. Although I have few other children's (non-religious) novels drumming beneath my fingers, I haven't decided on a publisher ... Uggggh, my next thing :) So while you're here, print off a little Bible literature for your child. The "Blessed-Be-the-Children's Bible" lessons at: http://www.tcsb.org . I hope to turn these lessons into a future book someday. I'm not only a writer, but an online Bible teacher. My Ryze, Jesus' Love Online Bible Network, is presently shut down; but hopefully to get it reopened soon. If you'd like, I think you can login and review previous postings, though. No, you don't have to be a Christian there. But we want to share with you the love the Lord has on us all -- the love of Christ's that the world so urgently needs. I'm also a founder of a suicide network. Do you know of anyone who is desperate, depressed, possibly to the point of suicidial thoughts / attempts? If so, please let them know how I truly care. Here you will find a place of real hope, my friend ... http://www.savedbygracesuicidenetwork.org And, if any of you are writers out there and need editing / critiquing to your manuscript(s), pm me about my services. Comments from customers: "Jan offered wonderful insight and helpful hints when working on my story. She was professional and expedient and I would gladly solicit her assistance on future projects!" ~ A Simonson "Jan has done a great job of helping me edit my latest work in progress. Sometimes as an author, you are so close to your work that you do not see problems that you might readily notice in the work of others. Details are so clear in your own mind that you forget to convey them to your reader, because you assume they already know them. Jan helped me to give my first chapters real substance and a sense of place. After following her suggestions, my chapters came to life. I highly recommend her as a fair and objective editor." ~ G Haertlein "Jan's editing skills are superb. She thoughtfully and painstakingly looks at each word, each sentence, and helps you, the author, find better ways to "paint" the picture. Jan does not try to change your words, but rather offers advice. She is very constructive in her critique, and never once did I feel her condescending my work." ~ S Richmond "I really liked the way Jan edited my story. I had four people edit my story before Jan read it. I also had seventeen people read my story, and asked them if they saw any mistakes before I submitted it. Even after all that, Jan still found errors that other people missed. It shows that Jan has a real talent that ordinary people just don't seem to have." ~ C Alexinas "Jan is very professional in her critiquing and reviewing a manuscript. She is knowledgeable about what the publishing world requires and looks for in a manuscript, yet leaves your personal style of writing untouched. She edits grammar and spelling with proficiency and in a timely manner. I would highly recommend her." ~ L Pinkham "As to Writer’s Eye editing services, I thought they were excellent…I felt I really got my money's worth with the editing, and believe me, that's important to a writer. I have very little knowledge of exactly what an editor should, or should not do, but Writer’s Eye editing was very helpful, and I felt my writing improved because of it." ~ A Bennett Another blurb several months later from the same author, A Bennett ... "Jan, I want to share something with you. I have gained more respect for "real" writing from you, and each time you send corrections, I get more enthused. Your thoughts and suggestions make me want to dig deeper for better phrases or words. I get excited about my work (and it's hard to do when you've read it a thousand times). We all need input such as yours, and I simply wanted you to know how much I appreciate yours. Thanks...! ~ A Bennett For any other inquiries, please pm me here at Ryze (top settings). or, go to http://www.savedbygracesuicidenetwork.org and click on "contact" and pm me from there. I'd like to hear from you! Thanks for dropping in :) Be richly blessed! Prayerfully, Jalyn http://www.savedbygracesuicidenetwork.org Sign in to be able to view Jazelle's guestbook and friends list!
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