Hi Jackie,
By using a free website service you are stacking the deck against yourself.
Doing business online is one of building trust in you and your offers.
Part of this trust is built by letting people know that you are committed to
the business. A free website just tells people that you are not commited
enough to invest about $6 a month in your own business to get a domain name
and hosting.
Free websites are ok for personal sites but lack the tools needed to track
your business's traffic.
You should also be careful of page elements.
A bunch of "bubbles" in the background does nothing to enhance your
presentation. It only serves to draw attention away from your message.
You are presenting "mixed" messages.
You have large text for "Independent Foreclosure Consultant " and pictures
of "Power Pops"
Opportunity's should be spelled Opportunities
You have too many choices in your main navigation.
A maximum of 6 is the accepted "rule".
Using the templates supplied by the free hosting service can be difficult.
There is a free, (open source), web design program called "NVU" that is
worth learning if you are not going to invest in a professional web design
program.
http://www.nvu.com/index.php
I can see you have put a fair bit of work into your site.
You just need to apply some "polish".
Reg
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