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| Aug 12, 2005 8:11 pm |
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re: Attn: Peter O'Connell re: Developing mantras, taglines, and slogans |
Cijaye DePradine
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Hello Mike,
I love "teamwork making the dreamwork" Mike, although, I would prefer dream and work separated to emphasize the fact that through positive, confident and champion oriented teamwork - you can make all of the BIG DREAMS work. (That is however most suitable if you are pitching your company as a company wide innitiative for team built successes). I might even suggest that you stick only to this as your tagline, mantra etc.
The reason: I am not sure what "Strategies that Mean Business" means though. Business Strategies is a pretty broad term, and I do recall that when you and I shared our first few conversations on Ryze that I was still unclear until you drilled down further what you really did.
Why don't you tell us all again what you do, in 10 words or less and maybe we can all work together to bring your tagline down into 5 powerful words or less.
:o)
Cijaye.Private Reply to Cijaye DePradine (new win) |
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