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| Sep 04, 2007 4:59 pm |
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re: I need your honest opinion please |
Eileen Brown
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I read most of the comments and only have a few questions
to ask. Some of the replies are quite correct. Some are
noteworty and nicely put and some are a bit, um... rude-ish.
Why would anyone want to target such a small age group of
people?
Does anyone in that age group have enough experience to
actully help each other?
Who and where is the expert these people will follow? You
need to list at least ONE. One in each field would be
best. Experts usually have a few years under their belts in
the real world so finding someone who is say 30-35 who can
actually be of service with good, solid business advice
might be a tad difficult.
The site itself is very good looking. You did a nice job
there. The text content is (semi) professional but does
have a few rought spots. Something to work on.
You do still need a hook, as has already been spewed out
above in other comments.
Keep a positive attitude, make some adjustments and ask
again.
"That" that does not kill you, makes you stronger.
Have a great and blessed day.
Eileen :)
www.bekansas.com
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