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| Dec 15, 2007 4:37 am |
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re: Please need your help ??? |
Marilyn Jenett
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Hi Dave,
I have a couple of constructive tips, since you ask...keep in mind that these are based on my personal frame of reference.
First, you need to proof your content. The punctuation, spelling and grammar needs to be cleaned up. Others may not mind this, but for me, a site loses credibility instantly if there are typos and errors. I was especially bothered that the name of your book has so many different variations (grammatically) - consistency will create your brand.
Another thing that is important to me as a website visitor is the testimonials. They must be authentic. When I see a testimonial from a doctor or MD, I expect to be able to find that professional on the Internet - if not a website then at least a mention in some journal, article, etc. All doctors are listed somewhere. I could not find any reference to the ortho surgeon on the Web, except your own page. These may seem like small matters, but you know what they say, "God is in the details." So it's important that testimonials appear authentic. People DO look them up.
One last practical tip for Ryze. If you add "http:" to your website address, the url will become a hyperlink and make it easier for members to go to your site.
Like this:
http://www.behealthy-livelonger.co.uk
With a bit of streamlining, the page will be great.
Marilyn
Marilyn Jenett, Founder and Mentor, the Feel Free to Prosper Program
Website: http://www.FeelFreetoProsper.com
Ryze Network: http://prosper-network.ryze.com
Programs and Products: http://www.feelfreetoprosper.com/products.htmlPrivate Reply to Marilyn Jenett (new win) |
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