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| Feb 04, 2009 4:23 am |
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Absolute Honest Opinions Needed Please |
Rodney Collins
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Please don't treat this as advertising because that is not the intention - I see that others have asked for opinions on websites, products, or on business letters etc. and I am seeking honest opinions on two versions of my Home Page.
1. Boring old stuff about taking advantage of the economic downturn. (Perhaps its not so boring?)
2. Much more personal with a 'help more people' mindset. I feel that visitors need to know they are dealing with a real person. They need to sense that the person is honest. They need to see that the person is an expert but got there through learning and growth during the life of the business, and most importantly they need to see that the person genuinely wishes to help them, and that the person considers his product has worth and value (perhaps my prices are too low and that doesn't speak 'worth').
Anyway, I would really value your opinions as to which is better.
here are the two versions:
1. http://www.readytousewebsites.biz
2. http://www.readytousewebsites.biz/index77.php
Please be totally honest - I have broad shoulders!
Rodney Collins
Ready-to-Use Websites (now with Short-term lease option)
http://www.readytousewebsites.biz (easy.fast.affordable)Private Reply to Rodney Collins (new win) |
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