Rodney. .... You've earned your pin. ..
Your first listing does a great job of telling your story. I would like to see a short video of you introducing yourself. ... Preferably interactive video and showcase some of your other features.
Change the headline to a positive ... "Now is a great time for a new Web site".
Why are you expecting visitors to jump through the hoops of filling out a form to contact you when they're at the height of their interest? Use a contact portal and make it easy to instantly contact you. (See Towncrier's contact link in my profile).
It's cost money to get this visitor. ... Include a strategy for staying in touch with them. .... They're here because they have an interest in having a web site. Offer a complimentary report. ... "Ten questions web designers hate to hear but you must ask" and stay in touch. See "Are 27 contacts really necessary" in Towncrier's Reports Archive
Reformat your email links so they aren't harvestable by the spiders.
I really like the "Realistic Lease Terms feature".
Post a Tweet on Twitter "Rodney Collins offers lease terms on new Web Sites". .. (Use a Mailto: auto-responder for info). and I'll be glad to ReTweet for you. More ...
Teddy Towncrier CPP Towncrier-Media.com Supercharging Your Visions.
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