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| Jul 25, 2007 1:03 pm |
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re: Profile critique #20 - Paul Steven |
Sue T.
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Good Morning Paul :)
I think if you were to put the picture you have of yourself as your header picture, with the label underneath of the organization you do the marathons with, it may make it clear to those who go to your page what other interests that you have.
The other photo, with all of your associates on it, could go lower, with a description of your photography studio under it. I am curious though, why you're photo isn't among those who you are associated with on your primary photo that's there. You know, with your associates?
Perhaps, you could break up your page, with something about your marathons, then your photography business (not exactly in this order) and then something about meeting your wife online later down the page.
And then towards the bottom, how you like to get to know people, for the guest book section.
You could, if you don't already, I may have missed it, put a link to the photography your company puts out, so people can have a little taste of your work. You know, kind of like, seeing is believing. :)
What I'm saying is that it's a little confusing as to what your page is promoting "exactly"... Does this make sense?
Yes, I do agree with Jeanie's post on reviews. I remember when I first began putting things together I felt... some how put down if someone critiqued my hard work :)
Usually because I was so proud of what I'd learned so far and was really trying to do what I felt was best. Interestingly enough, I received a critique from a well meaning member of my network and I thought... okay, what he's saying makes sense. And I thanked him.
I think the thing to keep in mind about this type of review is to remove ego and be open to suggestions w/o assuming its a personal slam.
Sue T.
Sue T.
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