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| Jul 25, 2007 3:59 pm |
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re: re: Profile critique #20 - Paul Steven |
Heidi Caswell
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Sue, I hadn't thought of the portraits as associates. Maybe because I'd already seen several of them on the photography network. I saw them as part of Paul's portfolio.
Come to think of it, Real Estate offices often do something like that for their associates and place one of their properties where the marathon photo is at. So I see how it can be unclear, and a new person would have no idea which picture is Paul if he hadn't added "Yes, I'm still running. . ."
The graphic looks nice, neat and professional and the bus gets everyone's attention. Maybe move them around a little, like a collage or something, full picture, others showing the business portrait in use such as part of a publication. Or just the bus logo and somewhere a link to your portfolio and/or a little about why a business person should have their own professional portrait, ways to use such (can be on website).
Paul, I like the marathon photo, shows your energy and enthusiasm. I keep flipping back and forth whether it would be best to put only a photo of yourself at the top, or the business logo image. In the end I believe either way works.
The bold text looks like you are yelling. Try bolding just some of the text. Very clear how you'd like visitors to behave. I bet it cuts down on drive by networkers.
Heidi Caswell
http://connectsimply.com/blog 
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