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| Jul 25, 2007 8:45 pm |
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re: Profile critique #20 - Paul Steven |
| Tina Brooks
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Hi Paul,
I like the way your personality comes out in your page. That to me is very important.
The only potentially negative comment I might make is that having read your page, I failed to learn anything new about you. Your likes, dislikes, what kind of person you are, that sort of thing.
What are you working on... (aside from the personal marathon thingy -- very commendable by the way). What are your goals, who are your partners who are you best to do business with, etc.
Don't sell me, but educate me... I like walking away from a page thinking... Wow, I know enough about this person to either do business with or be uninterested in doing business with them.
Someone said earlier that your PM thing put them off... I like that it puts some people off, it tells me that you're only interested in people who are going to put effort into what your gig is... I think that's a cool idea and recommend keeping it.
T
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