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Profile critique #20 - Paul StevenViews: 236
Jul 27, 2007 10:17 am re: re: Profile critique #20 - Paul Steven

Marilyn Jenett


I went to your page and noticed something changed in the last couple of days. I have a 21" screen and yet the page and text runs way off the screen! You have a caption there that is too long and makes the page much wider than it should be.

Also I notice in your marathon bio, there is a contradiction. In one sentence, you state that you have been running marathons for over two years. In the next, you say you just started running recently. Doesn't compute.
You might want to state instead that you just started running a couple of years ago, etc...

I noticed that you now state that you only serve Southern Florida at this time. That's a positive so the public doesn't think you bus across country :-). Yet.

I have a suggestion regarding the discussion about your marathon photo. Why not have that very professional headshot we've seen of you previously on Ryze - that should be the dominant photo - and below it have your marathon photo? I think letting the public see both sides of your life adds interest.


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