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Profile critique #20 - Paul StevenViews: 259
Aug 01, 2007 6:45 pm re: re: added bling bling weekly site recom/Profile critique #20 - Paul Steven
Tina Brooks One just has to look at your page, Paul, and they know that I am late to the party!

Wow! What a testament! THAT is a Ryze page!

I guess I get to critique what you've already done... :)

The 25% off coupon next to your photo in the photo montage... For equilibrium's sake, I'd move your photo over to the left margin and increase the font of that coupon! What a nice offer. Also make that bottom margin level so that the left graphics end the same place as the right side graphics... As if it were one montage, not two stuck together... make sense, if not, I'll try and redescribe what I mean.

The tables below, with the about me and the welcome... should be aligned to the left in the same vertical plane as the graphics.

I didn't look hard at the text for grammar or typos, but if you haven't already do so... One jumped out at me in the first paragraph on the right hand table where there is no space between Paul and Steven.

Great page!



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