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| Aug 02, 2007 4:07 am |
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re: Profile critique #20 - Paul Steven |
Gery DiMarco
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Better late than never? Sorry I didn't get this in as planned, Paul, but it is here as promised.
The photo montage styled ad with the personal frame to the left is great. I'm a symetrical kind of person so the two bordered columns aligned right underneath it threw me but then they would not look better centered so I think you did OK there. I do think it narrows your page too much for all the info you have in them, though.
I like the personal information side and especially like the networking tips side. The only things that distracted me were the uneven content length and the use of two different types and font sizes side by side. Paul, had you tried doing your section titles in a second color? I wonder how that might look. Another thought that occurred to me (putting aside my preferance of symmetry) would be to have one column width larger than the other.
Another thing I like is the way you engage the reader conversationally with questions. It projects the feel of your interest in the reader more so than to sell your product or services. It is a good relationshipping step consistant with your networking theme. Overall, I find it welcoming. I look forward to seeing what you do with your business website as well.
Gery DiMarco
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http://www.gotherightdirection.com/580935
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