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My First Film - Please need your feedbackViews: 243
Jul 09, 2010 9:25 am re: re: My First Film - Please need your feedback- on Youtube

Lavanya Karalkar
Thyagarajan, that was a good one. Your way of handling the climax was too good but dialogue rendering is not very clear especially of the boy i.e the hero..

But some dialogues eg." life na passiaon venumda life na life venumda" and ' kudule irukkara puli ' etc.

But too much of english usage . may be you want to depict a south indian brahmin family..

Finally the climax getting to be the anticlimax..there you have achieved thyagarajan.

why don't you send this clip to 'Madhan' where they are seeking young directors.

Good one ..Keep it up

I will give 3 *s since it is your first directorial venture.

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