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| Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | Views: 445 |
| Jan 07, 2010 4:02 am | | Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
S J | | Hello Rize Family..
I have started my own business, and because I value so many of your opinions...I would love for you to check out the work that went into the Site:
www.financialwealthbuilders.com
Please let me know the following:
What you think of the site?
Is the information clear and understandable?
Is the concept clear?
This is my first attempt at my own business...and a site, and I am eager to know what you think.
Thank you very much everyone and I look forward to your responses!
ShelleyPrivate Reply to S J |
| Jan 07, 2010 11:26 am | | re: Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
Eric Youle | | HI S.J
There are a number of point/issues arising -
firstly this does look like a disingenuous attempt at advertising, but I will pass on that
secondly you provide no personal information, your profile is empty apart from initials - this does not generate a connection or contribute to your personal branding.
thirdly your (affiliate) web site is bright cheerful, easy to navigate - but says almost nothing - does not appear to identify the type of ventures to be involved, nor the potential return or effort involved.
Just my thoughts, hope they help
Eric
http://youlesucceed.mtexpro.com/goland5
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| Jan 08, 2010 1:30 am | | re: Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
Jeff Beeman | | I have to agree with Eric on this one. Not a bad looking site but you would do good to set up a capture page with a email auto responder that helps to build a relationship before sending to a sales site.
Happy Selling!
Coach Beeman
http://jbnetmarketing.net/prospecting2.html
Auto ResponderPprogram -> http://jbnetmarketing.aweber.com
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| Jan 16, 2010 8:57 pm | | re: Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
S J | | Thank you for your help.
Contrary to your disappointing comment Eric, I actually was NOT trying to advertise. I've never built a site before and "thought" that ppl in this grp were here to "HELP" one another...so therefore I asked for HELP. SILLY ME! I'm trying to learn how to market...and how to attract an audience.
I was taught if you don't know something...the smart person ASK. Therefore that's what I was doing...asking.
But moving forward...thank you both for your opinions. I appreciate them VERY much. I will take them both to heart and work on the site a bit more.
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| Jan 16, 2010 9:09 pm | | re: re: Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
John Snyder | | SJ,
Don't be too hard on Eric or any of us here, Of course we want to help you but understand that so many people have used this ploy to get traffic to a particular Web Site, that you don't know who to trust. Thank You for coming out and explaining your motives, if any of us can be of help, we will be. Thanks also for the Chiding and helping us to remember that some people need help.
John Snyder
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| Jan 19, 2010 4:40 pm | | re: re: re: Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
S J | | Thanks John. I really appreciate your comment. I feel much better. I didn't know that ppl have used this in the past to try to get their website/business noticed. I can definitely understand the skepticism now. But I'm really just a novice, stepping out on faith...trying to do something I've never done before. And will now go back to the drawing board and try to make it a bit better!
Thanks again!
ShelleyPrivate Reply to S J |
| Jan 29, 2010 2:08 am | | re: re: re: re: Would Really Appreciate Your Opinion | # |
Liz McGowen | | Hi. Hope you don't mind a little feedback. It's an interesting concept, and the photos in the background are beautiful.
I think I understand what you're doing, but the concept is a little fuzzy... and might be even more fuzzy to someone who is brand-new to the industry.
I'm wondering what might help... perhaps a free report, or illustrations describing scenarios you work with? I'm not quite sure. But it is a really neat idea.
It might also be useful for you to have some way to capture the email addresses of your visitors. That would allow you to stay in touch with them as you add new companies, form new teams and need people, and illustrate for them how this is working. Maybe kind of a "case study" would help make things clearer.
Or maybe some sort of "free consult" for people who are already struggling to build a team and might be able to use your expertise.
And there's something called "page 7" in the upper right hand corner that might just be a typo...
Again, hope you don't mind me throwing out some ideas. Do let me know how it works out!
-liz
Liz McGowen
Blog: http://www.MLMNetworkMarketingLeadTips.com
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