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| | The The CopyWriters Connection Network is not currently active and cannot accept new posts | | inner most thoughts | Views: 371 | | Jan 21, 2006 4:45 pm | | inner most thoughts | # | 
devika kataria | | inner most thoughts
hiding from the world
the pain so strong
its getting harder by d min
for it tears my world apart
my heart in pain
all i ever need is 2 hold u closer to my heart
to hold that hand once more
and never to let go
to keep u inside me
along with the dreams
with the memories still intact inside me
the going gets tougher
how i crave for you to come back
i know it deep down that you love me still
for the bonds too strong to be broken
every word i say is true
for heart never lies
all i need is antidote for me survive
n that u r my dose..d one who cn help me get by
---------- i was geting a bit rusty..so heres a poem..though not one of my best works for sure!Private Reply to devika kataria | | Jan 21, 2006 7:37 pm | | re: inner most thoughts | # |
Rajeev Kumar | | Who has the time and inclination to judge what is best.You set your own benchmarks in life and constantly improve on them.Write for your own satisfaction and improve on style of expression consistently.Read lots of poetry and analyse the styles and create your own.What is important is never to let the urge to express your innermost thoughts take a back seat.
Keep it up and Keep at it, Devika.
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