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| Treasure of Sorrow | Views: 482 |
| Feb 07, 2006 4:10 am | | Treasure of Sorrow | # |
Faridoon Shahryar | | Dedicated to my good friend Devika Kataria
TREASURE OF SORROW
There’s nothing a man can do
If the will isn’t willing enough
To let go the treasure of sorrow
There’s nothing left to do
If the hopelessness of purpose
Gnaws at the clueless tomorrow
A smile is your best friend
When there’s nothing left
Except golden time to borrow
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| Feb 07, 2006 3:34 pm | | re: re: Treasure of Sorrow | # |
John Snyder | | Steven,
What is one to add to that, except to say it was beautiful and beautifully written.
John Snyder
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| Feb 07, 2006 4:41 pm | | re: re: Treasure of Sorrow | # |
Rajeev Kumar | | As I read the episode described so artistically by Steven,I felt the silence communicating.That kind of a story makes one pause and think and know where we are going and how.
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| Feb 08, 2006 9:38 am | | re: Treasure of Sorrow | # |
devika kataria | | im still searching for words!...thanks a lot!a poem dedicated to me!its the best thing someone has ever done for me.the poem and the thought behind is really touching and it sure touched my heart.this poem is going to be on the first page of my book( when and ever if i get a chance to publish one)! it was amazing ..simply amazing! thanks once again...may god bless you and everyone whom you love.
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| Feb 09, 2006 12:55 am | | re: re: Treasure of Sorrow | # |
Faridoon Shahryar | | Thanks to all you guys....I am glad that you liked it Devika...
Cheers
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