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Oct 24, 2006 5:53 amEid#

Harjee KapurŪ
eid mein kuchh khaas hai
alayeda ek mithaas hai
duaa-on ka rang jo laati hai
sach khwabon ko kar jaati hai

eid ka raaz, eid hi jaane
harjee lagge salaam sunane

har din ki mubarak, har raat ka nazraana
roz dekhe tu eid, roz chand sa muskurana.

eid mubarak !

[a client briefed me a few days back to write a short sher for an 'eid mubarak' ad. me liked what i wrote. he loved it. so thought why not wish you the same.
in the ad, 'harjee' is replaced by 'hum']

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Oct 28, 2006 6:53 amre: Eid#

Avinash Deshmukh
eid mubarak !

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Oct 28, 2006 3:17 pmre: Eid#

'Harjee' ke Eid ke naghme ne
Dil ke taaron ko chher diya

Dil se jo copy niklee thee
Usne is dil ko jeet liya

In English:
Harjee's poem on Eid has touched
And struck the chords of our heart

When words are written from the heart
They reach, where else, but to the heart

Greetings of Eid, all the way from the UAE, to all the members of Steve's excellent network for copywriters.


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