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| The Internet Marketing Tools Network is not currently active and cannot accept new posts | Holiday Email Subject Lines | Views: 711 | Nov 30, 2006 4:42 pm | | Holiday Email Subject Lines | # | Steve Bralovich | | For those of you with opt-in email lists, here are a few tips to create response.
Subject Line 101 Not too long - 40-50 characters Don't repeat your from label, it's a waste of space Don't use all caps Don't overuse punctuation Don't abuse the word "Free" Most important information in the beginning
That said, let's see a few subject lines that need help.
Help Needed!
Nieman Marcus: FREE SHIPPING + The Gifting Event: Great gifts for everyoneAND YOU!
Too many caps, too long, too much punctuation weird spacing. This one hurts my eyes.
Banana Republic: Your Holiday Offer is Here + Men's Outerwear
What is the offer Banana?
Real Subject Lines I Like! Shutterfly: janine, 2 days to enjoy holiday cards on us RICHART Chocolate: Handmade French Truffles 2006 Frontgate: Remember, Save 20% Site-wide at Frontgate.com Brookstone: Full-size authentic arcade games--just like you remember
Generic Subject Lines I Like Buy one, get two widgets Gift baskets under $45 Gifts under $20 No S and H Holiday Daily: widgets under $20 Customer faves under $30 [Gift Certificate] $25 e-gift sent immediately Buy before Nov.30 get 20% off Order by 12/22, Holiday delivery guaranteed Buy a widget 10% goes to a cancer cure Stocking Stuffer Alert-Get a $5 gift card with purchase [Offline Specific] Invitation: Wine in-store Saturday the 22nd [Offline Specific] Last minute shoppers: Open until 9pm
Subject Lines for Salons or Day Spas for the Holidays Get Party-Ready Now - $35 for Mani/Pedi Holiday Rejuvenate - Spiced Scented Massage [Gift Certificate] Last minute shoppers: $35 Mani/Pedi day $20-$50 Gift baskets in stock
Subject Lines for Restaurants for the Holidays Have {COMPANY_NAME}’s holiday party with us Appetizers for you and 9 friends on us Last minute: Give a $50 gift card this season Take a shopping break, come in for a drink Bring this coupon in for a free appetizer with purchase Shop at Sally’s and get a drink at Harry’s
Subject Lines for Wineries Book now - 10 dates left for holiday parties Wine clubs: The gift that gives all year long Trio of wine under $50 with gift pack and card 40% holiday discount for wine club members Discounts and Free S&H for wine members 2005 Cab with our gift of Riedel wine glasses
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