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| Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | Views: 705 |
| May 25, 2007 2:09 pm | | Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
EmOtiOnAL FUeL | | Hey Krishna tu is kalyug mein aa kar to dikhaâ
Aapne 18 saal ki umar me mama kans ko mara,
BIN LADEN ko hath laga kar to dikhaâ
Aapne Arjun ko to Saari Geeta sunayee,
Mere Project Manager se ek baar baat kar ke to dikha..
Aapne toh Arjun ka Sarathi banke Pandavon ko jitaaya
Indian Cricket team ka Coach ban ke WorldCup jitaake to dikhaâ
Aapne bhari mehfil mein draupadi ko saree pehnai,
Mallika Sherawat ko ek jodi kapde pehna ke to dikhaâ
Aapne gokul ki 1600 gopiyan patai,
Meri company ki sirf ek ladki ko pata kar to dikhaâ
Hey Krishna tu is kalyug mein aa kar to dikhaâ
Dosto,Yahi Farq hai Uss yug mein aur aaj ke kalyug mein !Private Reply to EmOtiOnAL FUeL |
| May 25, 2007 4:57 pm | | re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
BLACK AND WHITE | | hey paarth kya tumne mujhe yaad kiya...
kavita acchi hai actually bahut acchi hai.
yeh wali bhi
aur aapke office wali bhi.
paarth :he krishn meri sahayata karo.
krishn :lage raho :):)
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| May 26, 2007 12:32 pm | | re: re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
Kreative Quest | | Hoe abt using the word "lubhai" instead of "patai"? Patai sounds Mumbaiya........... just a suggestion!
Cheers,
Ruchi.
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| May 26, 2007 12:38 pm | | re: re: re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
Lavanya Karalkar | | hello Goddess...really lubai will make the kavita wonderful.
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| May 26, 2007 8:25 pm | | Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
EmOtiOnAL FUeL | | Ruchi...
LK(g),
Aap dono ki observation and suggestion is good.Thanks a lot .
Apart from appearing Mumbaiya, if we replace the word "patai" with Lubhai....it sounds gentler and soothing too!
Aab I also realise that even "Tu" shud be replaced by "Aap"
Isi liye toh kahte hai ....aachhe and intellectual dosto ki company rakhni chahiye....they always guide U correctly.
Bhagwan Ji ....please forgive me , for I was not knowing the mistake I was doing , until Ruchi and LK(g) brought it to my notice.Private Reply to EmOtiOnAL FUeL |
| May 27, 2007 3:40 am | | re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
SOEB FATEHI | | LK(g) - surely you mean Kavitha . . . . Private Reply to SOEB FATEHI |
| May 27, 2007 5:43 am | | re: re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
Basab Ghosh | | ...... and 'Lugai', not lubhai...... :D Private Reply to Basab Ghosh |
| May 27, 2007 7:03 am | | wre: re: re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
Lavanya Karalkar | | why lugai? any particular reason. Basab Ghoshda..Goddess ka words change karne se pehle 10 bhar soch lena acha hai. Private Reply to Lavanya Karalkar |
| May 27, 2007 4:40 pm | | re: wre: re: re: Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
Hasmukh Gandhi | |
Sachmuch kalyug hai boss...
Bole to achhe acche log bhi patai, lugai or kavitha pe aa gaye...
Dear lord Krishna r u there?Private Reply to Hasmukh Gandhi |
| Sep 01, 2007 1:14 pm | | Kalyug Ki Kavita ( Poem) :D ! | # |
EmOtiOnAL FUeL | | Of Course HE is there , Hasmukh Bhai ! Private Reply to EmOtiOnAL FUeL |
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