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Not advertising, just want some feedback....Views: 1091
May 19, 2006 12:44 amNot advertising, just want some feedback....#

Antwain Conner
Hey guys, I just created a new website, www.femstyles.com....Let me know what you think about it...

1-needs work
2-ok
3-good
4-great

I value others opinions, and I can take criticism...Please let me know how you feel. Thanks.

Ant C.

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May 19, 2006 1:30 amre: Not advertising, just want some feedback....#

Reg Charie

1

There is no need to "shout", (all caps).
That just makes your copy hard to read. It does not make it more important.

The navigation needs work. It changes the amount of links depending on the page. Consider putting it down the left side if you are going to have that many links.

Your SEO needs work and some of the pages are in frames which means no search rankings.
And it is miserable to have to scroll within a page.

You should think about putting the site into a CMS (Content Management System)

Basically you have an affiliate sales site.
No different than the thousands of other affiliate sales sites.
For one of these sites to return a decent living you will need thousands upon thousands of products.
I have 2 friends that do the affiliate thing and I am not kidding when I say they have thousands of pages.
One has about 80 domains, 60 something are active.
It is a full time job keeping the products updated.

I went to one of your product links and got a "This product is no longer available."

If you want to make a success of the site, start writing content. Articles, "How To", Beauty Tips, and so on and tie these into your products.

Without content, and affiliate links do not count, you will never get ranked in the major search engines, and this will be where over 85% of your traffic will come from.

Reg
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May 19, 2006 12:13 pmre: Not advertising, just want some feedback....#

Audrey Okaneko

I wonder if I might offer my two cents. I ALWAYS go to "about us" and "contact us" pages as I want to know who I'm dealing with. I had clicked on a dress from your site and so the about us and contact us pages were from Fredricks. Had I contacted them, they would've had no idea what I was talking about in regards to your site.

I also have to admit, I found it very confusing to be on a "different site" each time I clicked an item. Is there a way to bring it all together, so that I'm not on a different site each time I click an item?

Audrey
Beginner Scrapbooking

 

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May 19, 2006 1:42 pmre: re: Not advertising, just want some feedback....#

Jaye Gipson
Audrey because it is an affiliate sales site, you will always be directed to the actual affiliate to complete the purchase.

My site is an affiliate shopping site also and that is the nature of the beast.

There are some sites that offer commentary etc, especially a lot that are directed at women. I have been working on adding this to my site.

I have one site and I manage to do ok with it. I have gone thru numerouse phases and it's still a work in progress that I am always tweaking and changing.

I am no expert by any means but I would say it is a 1. I think that there is real value in the suggestions from Reg.

Jaye
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Jun 03, 2006 5:25 amre: re: Not advertising, just want some feedback....#

Antwain Conner
Thanks so much for the feedback I really appreciate it. I will definitely look into all of you suggestions...Thanks and God Bless

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Jun 03, 2006 5:29 amre: re: Not advertising, just want some feedback....#

Antwain Conner
Thanks for the feedback Audrey....You made perfect sense with the about us and contact us issue...I didnt really look into that aspect like i should have. I want to tie all the products in together, but i'm trying to work around the issue of manually filling orders myself, that's what made me frame the pages like i did. I guess I should research some more..Thank you again and God Bless.

Ant C.

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Jun 03, 2006 5:34 amre: re: re: Not advertising, just want some feedback....#

Antwain Conner
Thanks Jaye....appreciate you taking time out to help me out. God Bless

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